Critique Please
Here's a sonnet I've composed and I would like your opinion on it; thank you very much, I really appreciate it!Light was sailing by on the golden skyAnd I remarked casually to the beams,Saying,...
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Hey there. I moved this up here - the forum you had posted it in is an archive; no one would see it there. There's something about this that I rather like. I feel like I am going to say that and then...
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Asub, Here's a perfect example of poetic diction crippling a poem. It's not a wittily crafted use of the archaic -- it's just stock "T'is" & "Thou" & such. There's a fresher argument under...
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